Saturday, August 04, 2007

I leave this at your ear for when you wake

...pulled!

5 comments:

Jon M said...

I loved this, it conjured up images of sitting in old pubs in Westport, playing in sessions! And a little sad bit at the end?

A fine poem from the land of fine music!

Cailleach said...

Cheers jon m - funnily enough I was at a great session ceoil on Friday night.

Ben Wilkinson said...

I liked this: the tone suits the subject really well and it flows very naturally. The only problem I had was with the drunken trolls - seemed to clash somewhat as an image and it didn't seem in tone with the rest of the poem.

Glad you're enjoying the poetry workshop.

Dick said...

I'm happy with the drunken trolls & all accompanying verses. Much to enjoy here.

Cailleach said...

I raise a tankard to Dick and Ben, thanks for the reads