Getting out of my mind and into the world
Fantastic poem, did you write that Barbara.
Yes Mary - thanks - it needs a bit of work, but I'm just road testing it for now - it'll be gone in a few days...
It has reached an intense ending this poem, very earthy and "soily",great.Best wishes, Davide
Thanks Davide - others have commented on that too - that's good, I think!
Warmest congraulations - hope you are proud! of yourself you should be! (Not least of all for those lovely kids!)'Earth has its own smell, a musty humus,as the whump and slither of a spade sucks upnew sods, whacked quickly to submission, white roots'this is beautiful - loved the whole poem of course ... but these lines especially.
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Fantastic poem, did you write that Barbara.
ReplyDeleteYes Mary - thanks - it needs a bit of work, but I'm just road testing it for now - it'll be gone in a few days...
ReplyDeleteIt has reached an intense ending this poem, very earthy and "soily",
ReplyDeletegreat.
Best wishes, Davide
Thanks Davide - others have commented on that too - that's good, I think!
ReplyDeleteWarmest congraulations - hope you are proud! of yourself you should be! (Not least of all for those lovely kids!)
ReplyDelete'Earth has its own smell, a musty humus,
as the whump and slither of a spade sucks up
new sods, whacked quickly to submission, white roots'
this is beautiful - loved the whole poem of course ... but these lines especially.