tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post4481706730071988888..comments2023-11-23T11:14:08.995+00:00Comments on Barbara's Bleeuugh!: A Christening Through BinocularsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06280161801824435219noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-9027756074278663002010-03-09T12:26:52.056+00:002010-03-09T12:26:52.056+00:00It's going beautifully for a first draft, Barb...It's going beautifully for a first draft, Barbara. 'I thought not, but didn't say' sums up my reaction to the Goddery that R and R bring home from school.Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-9024680095248580492010-03-05T15:40:45.302+00:002010-03-05T15:40:45.302+00:00Davide, that's a very good point - you might h...Davide, that's a very good point - you might have helped me unlock what I thought was wrong...<br /><br />Thank you to everyone else, it's been a rough week, so it's been nice to hear your comments :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06280161801824435219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-9232222545094489882010-03-03T19:19:07.105+00:002010-03-03T19:19:07.105+00:00I enjoyed this poem but I felt: identify yourself ...I enjoyed this poem but I felt: identify yourself with him and SENSE, just for a tiny second, heaven even inside those, for us, so normal, -maybe a bit dull too?- walls.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-60486282963364103262010-03-03T00:08:25.947+00:002010-03-03T00:08:25.947+00:00Reminded me of my own children's Christenings ...Reminded me of my own children's Christenings - a long time ago.Dominic Rivronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02618013365521035400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-72528827582582485222010-03-01T22:00:25.130+00:002010-03-01T22:00:25.130+00:00I liked this, and am particularly fond of "mo...I liked this, and am particularly fond of "moment" poems, and this is a good one. I know exactly those "shushing smiles", so loved that, and also the "I thought not, but didn’t say,..."<br />The last two lines, and the play on crowns, I thought were very good.<br /><br />Not too rough at all then!Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-22314809688031126172010-03-01T21:37:15.309+00:002010-03-01T21:37:15.309+00:00A new word coined in the English language!
I lov...A new word coined in the English language! <br /><br />I loved the downy headsPeter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-67638757380817050652010-03-01T19:24:04.535+00:002010-03-01T19:24:04.535+00:00Super-duper opening line!Super-duper opening line!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-83929132881168828632010-03-01T17:29:50.069+00:002010-03-01T17:29:50.069+00:00I really liked the "loose angels". Very ...I really liked the "loose angels". Very nice, not rough at all.<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-60267083490978516882010-03-01T16:04:51.698+00:002010-03-01T16:04:51.698+00:00Cool! I wish I remembered being baptised.Cool! I wish I remembered being baptised.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-10348780986486592952010-03-01T14:37:12.677+00:002010-03-01T14:37:12.677+00:00A lovely moment to grasp.
ThanksA lovely moment to grasp.<br />ThanksEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-29088722022628384192010-03-01T13:57:12.566+00:002010-03-01T13:57:12.566+00:00I really liked this little extract of a moment :-)...I really liked this little extract of a moment :-).. kid's are great aren't they!Batteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-84484343147272857972010-03-01T12:37:50.970+00:002010-03-01T12:37:50.970+00:00Aw thanks guys; it's one of those that came ou...Aw thanks guys; it's one of those that came out of nowhere, so I'm pleased to get somthing out.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06280161801824435219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-25514459858739932942010-03-01T10:32:35.058+00:002010-03-01T10:32:35.058+00:00I like adding the child's point of view here.I like adding the child's point of view here.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-52936024798040512132010-03-01T08:19:34.742+00:002010-03-01T08:19:34.742+00:00When she was littler our daughter once got stuck i...When she was littler our daughter once got stuck in the middle of binoculars (like a record) so we now always call them 'binocanocanocanocanoculars'.<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-16639278034296839442010-02-28T23:07:37.342+00:002010-02-28T23:07:37.342+00:00It's not rough - I like it.It's not rough - I like it.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-16164188964592914622010-02-28T22:11:28.885+00:002010-02-28T22:11:28.885+00:00So far so good! Nice one B.So far so good! Nice one B.Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20387918.post-43226830343883766962010-02-28T15:15:25.648+00:002010-02-28T15:15:25.648+00:00oh I like this :o)oh I like this :o)bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09356982330855702882noreply@blogger.com